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Rusty Gold

A messy master doc I made for a fantasy world that’s been rotting my brain for years now. 

Most of this is very stream of consciousness as I was just trying to get my ideas down, and I’m just now realizing this is 10 pages of fantasy politics that most of the characters don’t even care about. This is incomplete and ever evolving with highlights sprinkled throughout that are just notes to myself, but have fun having a look into my brain ヽ(・ε・`)

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Rusty gold - pure gold does not rust or tarnish, so it is showing signs of tarnishing, those are signs of impurities. Or it could be the other metals in the alloy tarnishing, seeing as gold is too soft to wear as jewelry on its own. 

Possible theme of how colonization and war and the cycle of violence hurts everyone. It hurts those who are subjugated, those who are exploited for labor, those who fight in the wars. It hurts the planet, the plants and wildlife who have to deal with human greed and our need for expansion. It even hurts the people at the top, the ones who are benefiting from the systems of oppressions. No one will ever be truly happy in the system, and the only way out is to break the cycle, no matter how impossible that seems. 


Worldbuilding 

Races

Referred to as different species in-universe, but the “species” are all just humans with different manifestations of magic, but have divided themselves as if they are different species. 

A lot later in the series there could be a movement to refer to them as different races rather than species, seeing as without their magic, their biology is pretty much identical. 

Entomon

(greek for insect, or cut in pieces)


Butterflies

Monarch Butterfly

Bees

Honey Bee

Bettles 

Firefly

Humans


(everything else in this section  isn’t fleshed out, gonna come back around later)

Fae

Others confused with Entomon, who might be very mad at the comparison. Almost like a slur to them. 

Avians 

Bird people 

Peregrine falcon

Owl

Peafowl 


Naiads

Koi

Countries

Silph

Ora Colony

Hikmah

Danaus

Mellif

Inyosi

Nyuk

Religion

The gods of their world gave them all specific magic to fulfill different roles when they work together, but the people instead divide themselves based on those differences, making the gods a bit jaded and indifferent to humanity. What’s the point of stopping this war when another is bound to start up again before you know it? They gave humanity the tools to have a harmonious society, but they also gave them free will that gave them the choice to squabble over power and resources. 

Orlaith

Basically the roman catholic church. Lots of justification for their imperialism. 

Worship one God, who is believed to be the creator god. While other divine deities mess around with humanity on the regular, this creator God has never made their presence known. At least in a way that can be tangibly proved, having a creation myth on the creation of the universe and also why witches have absurdly powerful magic. They believe their magic is divinely ordained, human nations having a “divine right of kings” sort of government because of it. 

The Entomon Pantheon

The Entomon all have their own deities, but they all believe in the other deities that they don’t worship. All the Entomon deities are part of a pantheon that actually exist and interact with the Entomon from time to time, so there isn’t really the question of if their gods exist or not (objectively, they do exist, they just aren’t super powerful or all knowing). These deities act very human, similar to the greek gods, getting married and having children and making mistakes. They mostly show up in times of strife when nature is endangered. The deities are more or less indifferent to the problems of their worshipers, only caring about the state of the planet. The Entomon get the magic from their insects, so a lot of their religion is to protect the welfare of those insects. 


The deities are much more concerned about the protection of the planet rather than the affair of humans. They gave the entomon their power and the gift of flight in exchange for them working to protect the planet. The Inyosi are given the power to protect themselves against the Mellifera, not because they are being favored but because the Mellifera are actually hurting the planet with their honey production and industrial farming. The Nyuki also aren’t helped by their deity to escape their enslavement because doing so wouldn’t help the planet all that much, seeing as the group of Nyuki are too small to make a difference in the Mellifera's power. The deities are pretty lawfully neutral and goal oriented when it comes to the protection of nature, and are literally incapable of empathizing with human suffering. 


Entomon are able to have the choice to become one of the Gods after a show of great sacrifice and devotion, but choosing godhood means sacrificing their empathy and humanity. What good is living forever if you aren’t capable of human connection anymore? A question that could make for good flash fiction.

Bees

The honey bees are very successful so they almost never have interaction with their deity. The European honey bees are closer to religious fanatics with their bloodsport to decide their next queen and their extreme gender roles. Pretty much all societies follow a matrilineal descent system. This makes more sense than a patrilineal system. If the lineage is traced through the mother, you always know for sure that it’s her child because she’s the one that gives birth, so the issue of illegitimate children never really comes up. This is used as a reason by the Mellifera for their extreme gender roles. The queen is commander and chief of their military, but their religious leaders are the ones who actually have the most control. 

Butterflies

The monarch butterflies are in big trouble, so a main part of the plot is their deity trying to get someone to save the forests that the butterflies hibernate in. Believe that the actual butterflies that they protect are the souls of the deceased and their ancestors. The butterfly migration could be merged with a day of the dead type ceremony, using milkweed instead of marigolds. 

Beetles

Fireflies tell a lot of stories, relying on oral traditions about the creation of the universe and lessons on morality, so stories tend to vary from region to region. Something about the stars would be important to religion. Possibly a trickster god, stealing knowledge from the gods and giving it to humanity. 


Conflicts 

European Honey Bees and Monarch Butterflies 

Ora Colony rebellion

Bee conflicts

Hikmah and Silph

The Honey Industry is basically the real world Sugar Industry

Worldbuilding question of the day - tumblr

What, if any, resources are the people of your setting running short of or in danger of running out of?

As technology advances, people might be looking to get their hands on quartz (or some other made up gemstone that’s a good conductor or maybe a power source). Danaus has very big quartz deposits and Silph invades to take control of those mines. 

What festivals and holidays occur in the spring in your world? How are they celebrated?

Different cultures have their own celebration, but those that live in areas with four seasons would celebrate the spring equinox and the end of winter. Danaus celebrates the monarch butterflies going back north after hibernating for the winter, it should be an official celebration and it should have a name. 

What festivals and holidays occur in the winter in your world? How are they celebrated?

Pretty much everyone celebrities the winter solstice seeing as it’s the shortest day of the year. There’s two weeks before the end of the year, and the solstice and the entire winter festival takes place during this time. The summer solstice is a much smaller celebration but still observed. 

How do people in your setting explain where babies come from to their youth?

Don’t have an answer for this one yet, but I think it’s funny so I’ll come back to it. 

Maybe it relates back to flowers for entomon. Mommy has a flower and daddy has a flower. They share the pollen from their flowers and they get a seed. They plant the seed and that seed becomes a baby. 

What are common gender stereotypes in your setting?

The genders are pretty equal among most species, but men are usually stereotyped to be less hardworking than women. Girls develop faster than boys and noticeably outperform boys when they are younger. Men are also less involved in the process of creating children, women being the ones who do the gestating and breastfeeding, and are seen as the ones who actually give life and make the father a bit irrelevant. 

Avian men are much more extravagant and flamboyant, being the ones expected to perform beauty to attract a partner while the women are expected to dress rather plainly. Similar to how a lot of colorful birds are the males trying to attract a mate. 

The gender roles for the Mellifera are the most extreme, treating men as mostly useful for procreation and serving women. 

The Inyosi are also a matriarchy. Not as oppressive towards men, but definitely not equal. More like our modern patriarchy, just flipped. Some men hold power but there is still a long way to go in terms of progress.

Does your setting have any technology or magic that can help people with poor vision or hearing?

Glasses are common, but for more intense vision loss, someone might have a familiar as a service animal. The familiar is not fully sentient, but can talk and express a limited range of emotions. They act on the will of their creator and can’t exist without the magic of their creator. If the creator does not use their magic to keep the familiar around, it will stop existing. They can read things aloud for those who are visually impaired or simply illiterate, and can act as an interpreter for those with hearing loss. Can also act as a guide for the visually impaired. 

There is a treatment that a healer can do for some types of vision or hearing loss, but it's a very expensive treatment that isn’t likely to work anyways, so familiars are a more common solution.

What kind of lighting is used in your setting?

Candles and gaslights are still in use for the most part, although they use a magic blue flame that burns much longer than regular fire. Lampyridae are able to make a heatless light that lasts even longer than the blue fire, some merchants making a living selling these lamps. 

A new type of light that runs on essence and can be easily switched on and off is becoming more popular, and will eventually make the other two methods obsolete. 

How common is bribery in your setting?

Mellifera have managed to become very wealthy, and frequently engage in bribery to get their way in the Silphion government, mostly to pass laws that benefit the way they run their businesses.

How much leisure time does the average person in your setting have? 

Mellifera have very little leisure time, most of their working class living in essentially factory towns. 

Lampyridae have a lot of leisure in comparison, working only as much as they need to in their nomadic groups, and get labeled as lazy and con artists (to be fair, some of them are con artists). 

Is abortion safe and legal in your setting?

Yes. As soon as a method was discovered by any of the groups, there was never much of a debate on if it should be used because I said so. 

What kind of materials are censored and/or banned by your setting’s government?

Silph does a lot of censorship when it comes to materials from outside the county. Specifical stories about merfolk, entomon mythology, and lots of books made by merfolk. Silphion students who study abroad are confused with how much information is available, especially in Hikmah with their extensive public libraries. Silphion students are also confused about the view of merfolk in Hikmah, treating them as equals despite their garish appearance. Silph becomes more restrictive with the amount of students are able to study abroad, eventually Hilmah’s borders are closed. 

What is your world’s greatest unsolved mystery? 

What exactly happened to this fallen empire of the past. Silph idealizes them and tries to emulate their past success, not being aware that the empire had collapsed in on itself from their own hubris. In regards to hubris, Silph is following in their footsteps. 

Have microorganisms been discovered in your world?

Yes, but it’s relatively new. Many healing practices are things that have worked for centuries, discovered through generations of trial and error and maybe divine intervention. Medicine that doesn’t require the magic of healer has always existed, but wasn’t considered very effective. More modern developments are being made to make that sort of healthcare more accessible in places that don’t have access to the more miraculous forms of healing magic seen in major hospitals and ease the workload of people already in the profession. Healing is somewhat of an uncommon talent, so those who have it tend to be overworked and a bit underappreciated. 

Do/es your fictional species exhibit sexual dimorphism?

Some of them do. The wings of monarch butterflies differ in shade, but you don’t notice unless you're looking for it. Workers bees are stronger, but drones have better eyesight and are better fliers. 

What extreme sports exist in your world? 

There’s a large network of underground fighting rings. There are official fighting matches, but those have strict rules and regulations to put together fair fights, but in underground fighting it’s a true free for all and considered more fun. 

Entomon and avians have some sports involving flying, displaying speed and agility.  


Brain dump

Just some random ideas. brainstorming

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Street magic vs studying magic. Not everyone goes to school for magic and has their own ways of doing things. Going to school for magic doesn’t immediately make you an expert. Not everyone pays attention in school either. Even if you're learning cool magic stuff, some kids are going to find that boring. 


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Witches can get a sickness from overusing magic, it’s actually frighteningly common. Sharp crystals grow in the body like tumors and are very painful. Can happen in other species that use magic, but less common since it requires the use of a lot of magical energy all at once, something that most other groups aren’t capable of. 

A poison that can cause petrification, used as biological warfare.

A sickness where your own magic destroys your body from the inside out, starting with blindness and then the rest of the body shutting down. A genetic disorder, later discovered, can be cured if the person has their magic completely stripped from them, but it won’t erase any damage already done. 

A poisonous honey made from the nectar of poisonous flowers. 

A drug with the street name pollen. A golden powder. Cheaper versions with additives produce pink smoke when burned. 


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Food. there needs to be food

Honey, duh. Honey is used much more than table sugar. 

Mead is the most popular type of alcohol with the prevalence of honey.

beebread 


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Most of the reason for the rebellion is to dismantle this very rigid cast structure, establishing equality between classes and species. Their ideology is a bit more extreme, believing that the only way to achieve the goal of equality is to physically put everyone on the same playing field. No magic, no flying, no undersea cities. Achieving the goal of severing all of humanity from magic would throw the world into chaos. Their entire way of life is built on magic, getting rid of it would be near apocalyptic. But it will take away the power of the elite. They argue humanity will recover, not in her lifetime but one day, and that the world would be much better for it.  

There are other opponents of the Silphion government but don’t agree with the current rebellion’s ideology. They argue that nothing will change, that humans are bound to find new ways of categorizing and ostracizing people. There’s always someone at the top and someone pushed to the bottom. Burning the world down and starting over is not the answer, and they should instead work to improve the lives of people through options other than war. The rebellion  is called out for being hypocritical, using magic to fight this war to end magic, but they call it a necessary evil. Fighting fire with fire works if it’s used to choke out the bigger fire, causing both flames to run out of fuel and oxygen and sputter out. Backburning. 

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A big part of the plot is to get three important artifacts that were thought to be lost, representative of the bee, the butterfly, and the beetle. The HoneyBee Comb, The Sword of Danaus, and The Elytron Amulet. Each item has a great power of their own(something cool sounding, blah blah blah), used by those chosen by the entomon gods, but have lost their power in recent years, reduced to fancy trinkets. It’s believed that if they are all brought together they’ll have their past power again and can be used against the tyranny of Silph. All three are golden and have tarnished over the years from their loss of magic, hence the rusty gold (it’s all coming together, big brain time). Could have something to do with getting rid of all magic. 


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Fantasy racism is always a slippery slope, and what’s important about depicting it is making sure that the issue is handled delicately. There is no real justification for racism, but there will always be reasons that are manufactured and believed by other groups. There’s always a group that needs to be blamed for the misfortunes that the masses are facing at any given time. In times of economic strife or famine. When people are hungry they get angry, and when they’re angry they need someone to direct that anger at. Should it be towards the government that has failed to protect them, the government that was the driving force for the poor getting poorer and the rich getting richer? No. Their hatred is instead directed towards those that are different, those considered outsiders or less than. “They’re the ones taking your jobs, your money, what is rightfully yours. They are the ones responsible for this, and things could be so much better if we could just stamp them out.”

The gods of this world bestowed their gifts to the humans, giving them the tools to help them build cities and become stronger, although they did not anticipate humans using these new found differences as a reason to hate each other. Categorizing themselves and believing that they should only mingle with their own kind. They thought things would be making a turn for the better once humans without magic finally stop prosecuting witches, only for the witches to make it their goal to eradicate those that they didn’t view as “human”. The gods threw their hands in the air after the rise of Silph, deciding that it was best to stay out of human affairs and focus on protecting the rest of the planet, mitigating the damage they had already done. 

Witchcraft was the only innate magic that didn’t cause a drastic change in physical appearance, and used this as justification for how the other magic races weren’t human enough. Their first target was the Naiads, painting them as dangerous sirens and people who drown unattended children. Naiads used to come to Silph as tradesmen and dock workers, setting up their own communities, but they had all but disappeared in recent years. 

Entomon are next on the chopping block, but most tend to ignore. Even as they are forced to hide their wings and barred from certain professions and called fairies or even changelings, some say that this is just the way things are. That it’s just something that they have to put up with. Bees are seen as money hungry as their work in honey production has made some bees very wealthy. The monarchs aren’t respected as doctors, being seen as the ones who aid doctors with the healing process rather than being knowledgeable enough for things like surgery or diagnosing ailments or prescribing medication. Fireflies are seen as untrustworthy con artists for their illusion magic, and are the most likely to be called changelings.  

Witchcraft is a rare talent, and honing these powers is usually done through apprenticeship, one generation of witches passing their knowledge to the next in a very closed practice. Wizardry on the other hand can be studied by anyone since it doesn't require magic of your own, being taught in specialized schools. Silph restricts who can study there, only allowing humans and having a strict vetting process on top of that. Most witches don’t really respect thaumaturgy, saying it’s only called that to make it sound more important. 


Short stories that I might write one day

Probably not though


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A short story about the Mellifera choosing the new queen at the same time Silph is taking control. The horror of the new queens knowing they will have to try and kill each other in due time, all while the general public seems to have no idea how fragile their society really is right now. One of the queens makes a plan with a prince to run off before the games can start. When they are caught, they both have their wings taken. The young queen is forced to fight anyways, dying quickly and in shame for her treason. The prince is marked forever through his lack of wings, a reminder of what the Mellifera do to traitors. 

The girl’s fate was sealed, no doubt, but the prince’s case was actually given some weight in court. How much involvement had he had in this? His father testifies, pleading for his son's life. He is but a child, and the father takes responsibility for not raising his child right. The prince does not take this a kindness, saying they should have killed him rather than let him live without wings.


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A short story of monarch butterflies that were taken by Silph as hostages, forced to work as healers for the royal family. The stipulation being that if the witch in their care is harmed by their treatment, they will be harmed in the same way. If their patient dies, even through no fault of their own, they will be killed in kind. A high stakes situation to force the butterflies to provide the best possible care to the witches that have the tendency to overexert themselves, even when they are treated horribly. 

One of the best healers gets taken to the empress’ chambers, giving her treatment to help her sleep. Before the start she invites the girl to have a bit of tea, saying it would be quite rude for her to refuse. The tea is a truth serum, getting the girl to say everything she really thinks and insult the empress to her face. The Empress doesn’t get angry, knowing she can’t control people's thoughts, especially the thoughts of her hostages. She instead makes a deal with the girl, saying she will be released and can become a citizen of Silph if she works as a mole among the other hostages. The girl says she knows nothing about a possible escape, which is true, but the empress insists that no one trusts her with those secrets because she is the best of the healers and gets preferential treatment. If she shares her privileges with the others, they might let her in on secrets. She knows she is in no position to refuse, and the possibility of that better life is enough to sway her towards betrayal. She is eventually found out as a mole, but the empress keeps her promise of rewarding her for her work. She is given expert training in medical practices outside of pure magic, but turns down a cushy job at the palace. The empress burns her face for daring to refuse her, but lets her go to live her life as promised. She makes no plans of ever returning home since she lives with the guilt of her betrayal forever. The empress gives her the HoneyBee Comb, a bit absent mindedly. The empress says it’s no use to her, but could be pawned for a pretty penny and help a poor orphan girl provide for herself in Silph until she got her footing. The empress makes it out to be a great kindness that the girl should be grateful for, despite making it known that she considers the comb worthless. The girl never did end up selling it, feeling that it’s something that she should hold on to. 

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A short story about a young soldier, Kamari, being horribly injured. Extensive burns, three missing fingers, and wings that will never fly again. He’s too young to have been fighting in the first place, treated by a healer who is also too young to be working in a combat zone. The two bond over their lack of family, and what led them to think that the only way to make something of themselves was to throw themselves into the throws of combat. They promise to find each other after they go home. They aren’t able to make good on that promise, as the healer is hit with a petrification attack. Many died in the initial blast. She survived, but barely, and her wounds are fatal with no way to reverse them. The soldier stays by her side while she dies, realizing there's nothing more he can do but sing to her as she falls asleep. 


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A short story where Silphion and Hikman college students having a class debate on the issue of interspecies marriage. These marriages are currently not legally recognized by the Silph government, while in Hikmah they are legally recognized and for the most part socially acceptable. Interspecies marriage is very taboo among more conservative groups, and even relationships between variations of one’s own species. More progressive groups are quick to point out how the different “species” are really all just human, with extremely similar biology and all with the same level of consciousness, and consenting adults should be free to have relationships with other consenting adults. Furthermore, mating between species does not produce a mix of both species, and instead produces one or the other. An entomon and avian who have a child would not have a hybrid child, but would have a child who is either an entomon or an avian, the chance of either being fifty-fifty. This is because their differences are caused by magic and magic is different from their genetics. Similarly, a bee and a butterfly would also not have a hybrid child, instead having one or the other. The idea of mixing blood is incorrect and discriminatory. 

Some Silphion students walk away conflicted, but most are unconvinced since interspecies relations are prohibited by their Orlian beliefs and have spent their entire lives seeing that type of relationship as an abomination. 

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Dialogue exchange that could be expanded into a little vignette. 

Looking at statues in a museum. 

“Pretty, isn’t it.”

“Yeah. Can’t help but feel a little sad about it though.”

“How so? I thought you loved this nerd stuff.”

“I can’t help but be pissed about how my own culture will never be preserved and appreciated like this. The few exhibits they do have are horribly miscategorized. Not to mention stolen. Everyday that the war goes on is another day the Silphions erase what history we have left. They fight so hard to destroy that history. Our history.”

“I guess some badly preserved boats just feel like another thing they took just because they can.” 

“That’s why all of this matters to me. The bad research, the poor presentation, the horrible preservation. Silph thinks they can go around and decide who is and isn’t civilized, what parts of history are and aren’t worth preserving, and always write themselves as the heroes. I’ve always wanted to know just a little bit more about every destroyed village, every burned book, every family torn apart. I need to do something to preserve those stories because no one else will.”

“That’s very ambitious.” “You’ve lost a lot to this war, haven’t you?”

“I lost everything. They should forget that.” “You’ve lost a lot too.”

“That’s a bit presumptuous. Like assuming that any of this is supposed to make me feel better. We don’t really know each other.”

“We could change that. We’re both sort of alone, and both ended up at the library. There's something about all the marble in this place that makes people want to talk.”

“Well it’s not working on me.”


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A cool sounding line. 

“You don’t call yourself conquerors, but that doesn't mean you aren’t conquerors. You don’t think of yourselves as colonizers, but that doesn’t mean you aren’t colonizers. You don’t say you are superior, but you clearly believe yourself to be superior. “


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A story about how Silph came to power. I don’t know if it should be a narrative, or a history textbook. It could be both, using both to highlight how the revisionist history clashes with what actually happened all those years ago. The textbook version comes up in the main plot, some characters may comment on how it’s not accurate and the lack of primary sources, we already know that Silph is very controlling when it comes to flow of information. After that we get the narrative of how things actually happened, and it does seem like a nobel fight for freedom. But there is something rotten there, anger that persists for generations and leads to Silph’s iron grip on their colonies and plans to “unify the world”.



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